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Model: Lisa
~Lisa-Live-Love-Laugh

So Randi ~the-one-and-only-roo has this friend Lisa, who picks on me all the time. I thought she was fun. So now we be friends. and to anyone who knows me, If i have a friend, she must be shot (photographed)!!!!! Cheers. Hope you like!

i was going to use my sky from other pictures I have shot, and i even saved a few. But in the end I chose this one. This shot was taken by the VERY VERY useful ~grace-stock

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I'm popping in on behalf of *CritiqueWeek, and I'm so glad I popped in to see this wonderful photograph.

First of all, the entire setting reminds me of a perfect summer evening. The yellow and orange hue, the natural but not cliche surrounding, the pretty girl in the pretty sun dress - it looks like it might be a whimsical painting, but when you full view it, you can see it's a picture. It evokes nice thoughts and feelings when looking at it, the girl looks so enthralled and overjoyed to just be spinning around outside, without a care in the world. Gorgeous.

You managed to capture the movement fairly well, it's not too blurry and it isn't distracting. Her placement in the picture could have been better, but overall, it seems spontaneous enough to make it work, it gives it a 1970's feel.

I hate to critique without having any advice or tips to throw out, but I simply don't have any here, other then that it's muted in it's coloring just slightly enough to be distracting, because the trees run into the skyline and the ground line, but at the same time, it evens out when you think of it with another time era thrown in. So that can't even be considered a critique.

I'm very pleased that I chose to look at this picture - I feel better for it, like I'm on cloud nine with your model. It's incredibly endearing, truly! Well done.
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hehehe, thanks so much! I was so proud of it, I decided to put it up immediately!

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I bequeath myself to the dirt to grow among the grass I love.

And now I see clearly, it was you I was looking for, all of my days...

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I love, love, looooooooove this picture
it has everything, it really makes me happy
and she wears such a beautifull dress!!!

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Carpé Diem
Live everyday as if it is your last, because every single day could be the last...
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... :D Thanks so much!

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I bequeath myself to the dirt to grow among the grass I love.

And now I see clearly, it was you I was looking for, all of my days...

[link]
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Wow Meme... I am SOOOOO happy that you like it. I was really hoping you would. You will see more of her, this dress, and that shoot in the future. This was a multi-person shoot with Randi and Carlee!! So i am excited for it!

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I bequeath myself to the dirt to grow among the grass I love.

And now I see clearly, it was you I was looking for, all of my days...

[link]
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can't wait to see more!!!

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Carpé Diem
Live everyday as if it is your last, because every single day could be the last...
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One day soon sweetie///

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I bequeath myself to the dirt to grow among the grass I love.

And now I see clearly, it was you I was looking for, all of my days...

[link]
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oh what a JOY :D

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don't hold yourself

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Apr 6, 2009, 5:21:29 PM

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